seems a bit odd to me. the right arm is a bit stiff. may be the right shoulder is too high and i feel some tension there. the expression on the face is good. looking at it more closely, i think the right hand is too big/the fingers there too long. the breast is a bit too high or the clothes need to be tighter to push it up. the face is lovely, intense, alert. But other body parts are a bit out of proportion... may be because it is a painting for a game? The bracelet on the right hand looks realistic. the hair is good too. the eyebrow is only a single stroke... the right eyebrow is a bit slightly too straight at the right side (? not sure). I guess the more straight line on the face helps to give an impression of strength. These are just my impressions. I can barely draw anything.